Spark of hope (Gedicht)
Let me just believe
You’re the man
Who won’t break my heart
And disappears
So I can keep my hope
That you would love me
Because I know I would
Love you no matter what
But please let’s not try
To find out
I can’t lose my hope
Again
Schönes kleines Gedicht. Über die Grammatik der Zeilen:
„Who won’t break my heart
And disappears“
würd ich noch mal nachdenken. Kommt mir seltsam vor. Trotzdem gut.
Henkki
Do not only believe, be convinced. Your poem sounds afraid. Hope, you are not and these lines are made by doubt.
Schönes Gedicht